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Post by ebonyfire on Dec 19, 2007 1:06:00 GMT -5
*Portrait:
Name: Black Heart Age: 6 Gender: Stallion Breed: mustang
Herd Of Choice? Or Loner?: Ash Meadow Of Nani
- -NOTE!: just because you're putting what herd you may join, doesn't mean you're accepted into that herd. You still need to seek acceptance from the lead if there is one. If there isn't, than you obviously may take that position in the empty herd land.)
Persona: Evil, curel and very rarely nice
Sample Post (100 or More Words): from another site A newfounland cantered across the land. The newly budded grass moving gently as the patched stallion looked for any sign of a horse. He slowed to a stop and reared up, thrashing his forelegs about. "I, Devil Spawn, claim this land." His hooves hit the ground with a thud. "This land will be called Kajika meaning 'Walks with out sound'." He said keeping his eyes and ears open for any opposing stallions. Devil was a patched stallion with chestnut and white not nessacerily what most would consider a leader but they never realy meet him.
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Post by K e i r a .xx on Dec 19, 2007 14:39:41 GMT -5
Needs some work =] You need to add a little more onto your sample post because it isn't 100 words. Your spelling isn't all that great, so try using the spell check when you're having difficulty =] And his personality should be a bit more indepth =]
I didn't mean any of those things in a bad way, I'm just trying to help. Sorry if they sounded bad ^^
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Post by wowposter on Nov 8, 2008 5:39:22 GMT -5
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